When I sit down to critique one of my writing buddy's WIP's, here are the things I look for.
- The obvious: spelling and grammar
- Purple Prose
- Pet Words
- Plot flow - does the story logically make sense?
- Point of view glitches
- Cliffhangers - is there a reason to keep reading at the end of each scene?
- Overkill on description - the action must keep moving forward
- Overkill on backstory - too much at once is a deal breaker
There you have it...your own handy dandy checklist of items to look for next time you comb through a manuscript.
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2 comments:
I think the more we read others' writing, the better critters we become. I like being a critter, myself...hee.
Indeed.
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